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This was pretty good. I just wish that you made the trailer as long as the song.
I love that song! GO ANDREW PARKER!!!! Under Fire is the best.
Anyways, it was pretty nice.
Keep up the good work.
And, yes. Make the action a little speedier. It seemed a bit slow, not laggy, but just a little too slow.
Author's Response:
I know i runned it at 30 fps but ... =(
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The art and animation was pretty decent, though you might want to spend time perfecting some of the things, and the other guys are right; don't fake scream, and don't speak, whisper, or blow into the microphone...pretty annoying. Also, you might ant to get someone who can get a more natural sounding deep voice for Jigsaw. But other than those things, I say this was awesome.
Basically just tweak it, redo the voices, and then resubmit it.
Also, I could do a Jigsaw voice if you want.
Anyways, good job.
Keep it up.
Author's Response:
All of these things I did take into account and the main reason why the voices blow is because I recorded them almost a year ago which was also when I was a little snot with a weiner voice and I was also a lot worse at flash. I really would like to pimp it up and re submit it but heres an example of the hell I would have to go through: It took an entire hour, to put that shitty halloween link in at the end!!!! I can only imagine redoing the stuff you suggested. However, I will look into better voices for my flash in the future... Thankyou
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