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Nothing Phenomenal, But AWESOME!!!!

I loved it! It was interesting. And I liked the Sytrus presets/sounds you used. I can hear the Wood Bass distinctly. There is one spot that is a bit....dissonant. Which is around the second half. The sound is having some issues with the other sounds. Also the song peaks too much so it causes unwanted distortion. Remember, it's ok if people have to turn up their speakers a bit. So...yeah. I'd suggest remixing this by fixing the things I mentioned. If you did that, then this would be.....wow....beyond words. I like it anyhow.
Keep it up!

Nice.

I like it. Way to go for a stoner! :) J/K.
I don't like that little bloopidy-bop thing that goes throughout the beginning of the song. If you wanted to keep it, you might want to lower the cut frequency on it so it sounds muffled and maybe put on a delay or something interesting. Anyways.

Nice job. Keep it up.

PsyberGrind responds:

Your J/K is spot on ... *whistles*..
Yeah I know what you mean, it does get on my nerves. Hopefully I will finish this track or, maybe it's destiny is to be in the unfinished pile for eternity....!

At least with Ableton Live now it is more useful :)

w00t!

It was pretty interesting, but the vocals could use a lot of work. They sounded good, but the pitch seemed constantly off a bit, and your voice cracks...not good. Other than that, it's pretty good.

"And that's all I have to say about that."- Forrest Gump.

yoyo-warrior responds:

Ha, thanks! Some of the voice cracks are on purpose though. I like experimenting with different vocal styles.

Wow!

This is awesome! Way to go mister Meltin John!: )

Keep up the awesome work.
You and your song are on my favorites! :D

meltinjohn responds:

thank you very very much mister Aslan Emanuel!!!

Wow!

This is absolutely amazing. It's nice to having something fresh and new here on NG. The reverb on the piano is a very nice touch; gives it a sort of uplifting ambiance.

This would be classified as a classical piece. A very nice classical piece. Without the piano it could be an ambient piece, but I think miscellaneous.

Remake!

Dude! This is dang awesome! Remake this, though longer!
This is amazing.

Wow....

The only problem was in some of the orchestral parts. During the final verse the string and brass instruments seam to be cut off slightly, making it sound very synthesized.
Other than that? Nothing. Absolutely amazing. Nothing can compare to the things that people post on Newgrounds....I'm blown away.

Wow.

The second guy is right; the beats are out of place in parts, but for the most part, this song ROCKS!!!!
I think you did really good on this one.
Two thumbs up!
Keep it up.

gravedigger46 responds:

thanks a heap

Huzzah!

He lives!!!
This is very interesting. Though it's early and simple, it's still absolutely insane; it's still very well done.
Keep up the good work.
Very neat. Dark.

GO SEAN HODGES!!!!!!!!

Cool.

Vocal mixing needs to be improved and then add more melody, and then it will be way cooler than anything Fear Factory could come up with! :)
Keep it up man. Remaster to fully master!

soulmasking responds:

Yeah, I have often thought about remixing the vocals, but like I mentioned to other reviewers, I just don't want to keep remastering my old songs (this one being from 1999 and all). I agree also that the song could have benefitted from a stronger melody. I have found that there are many things that should and could have been changed in my older works. Maybe one day I will find that I truly wish to rework this song, but for now, I am working on pushing forward; working on several collabs and hopefully will be able to bring those to everyone sometime soon. I am highly appreciative of your critiques and comments! I will most definetly keep it! Thanks for your great review!

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