Drums...
...are way too quiet. The guitar could have a much fuller sound (not sure how your setup is, so I'm not sure how muh I can help you with that), but teh actual guitar work was absolutely splendid. I gave it a 9 instead of 10, because the mixing wasn't the best. Just keep fiddling around and you'll get it. (Especially make the drums louder)
Keep it up!