Nice.
I like it. Way to go for a stoner! :) J/K.
I don't like that little bloopidy-bop thing that goes throughout the beginning of the song. If you wanted to keep it, you might want to lower the cut frequency on it so it sounds muffled and maybe put on a delay or something interesting. Anyways.
Nice job. Keep it up.
Your J/K is spot on ... *whistles*..
Yeah I know what you mean, it does get on my nerves. Hopefully I will finish this track or, maybe it's destiny is to be in the unfinished pile for eternity....!
At least with Ableton Live now it is more useful :)
w00t!
It was pretty interesting, but the vocals could use a lot of work. They sounded good, but the pitch seemed constantly off a bit, and your voice cracks...not good. Other than that, it's pretty good.
"And that's all I have to say about that."- Forrest Gump.
Ha, thanks! Some of the voice cracks are on purpose though. I like experimenting with different vocal styles.
Wow!
This is awesome! Way to go mister Meltin John!: )
Keep up the awesome work.
You and your song are on my favorites! :D
thank you very very much mister Aslan Emanuel!!!
Wow.
The second guy is right; the beats are out of place in parts, but for the most part, this song ROCKS!!!!
I think you did really good on this one.
Two thumbs up!
Keep it up.
thanks a heap
Cool.
Vocal mixing needs to be improved and then add more melody, and then it will be way cooler than anything Fear Factory could come up with! :)
Keep it up man. Remaster to fully master!
Yeah, I have often thought about remixing the vocals, but like I mentioned to other reviewers, I just don't want to keep remastering my old songs (this one being from 1999 and all). I agree also that the song could have benefitted from a stronger melody. I have found that there are many things that should and could have been changed in my older works. Maybe one day I will find that I truly wish to rework this song, but for now, I am working on pushing forward; working on several collabs and hopefully will be able to bring those to everyone sometime soon. I am highly appreciative of your critiques and comments! I will most definetly keep it! Thanks for your great review!
\m/ (-_-)
Carpunch
Awesome.
I love this melody. Is it directly from the Ravers Fantasy song (never heard the original...I don't think), or is it from something that eventually got into Ravers Fantasy?
I've heard before. Werid. Weird. :)
Keep it up.
This is a remake of the song, I remade it in FL studio
The original is by Tune up!
They made it the original, not me, but it's the fucking shit, check it out some time.
Oh yes... There will be blood.
Pretty good. But it mostly sounds like Dimmu Borgir and Cradle of Filth (come to think about it, pretty much any Norwegian black metal group) in their early days. But other than that, pretty dang awesome. Very well done. And though it sounds like them in there suckie days, it's still much better.
It does!? Oo
Since I'm not really into Dimmu nor Cradle, I can't really judge on that. :/
Well...the sound does suck. I agree to 100 % there. If you like, check my newer stuff, you'll hear the difference for sure! ;D
DUDE!!!!!
Man! I listened to the first few seconds of it and favorited it right then and there. Amazing! It sounds like so many bands I've heard, and only the best ones. You almost sound like Mortal Treason (second album) at times, but mostly just totally freaking awesome.
KEEP IT UP!!!!!!
P.S. If you could make the outro not fade out, then that would make it totally perfect.
Wow...that was very nice. I guess I shouldn't blush...naa should I? :)
It really suprises me that a lot of people see so many bands in this song, even the fact that it's kinda my own style (at least I hope it is). Anyways, I'm very happy that you enjoyed this piece! As for the outro...well, hmm...I had no real idea for it. I didn't want the song to be ended abruptly, so I slaped soem fade-out over the last few seconds. Though, the song does have an actual end, you just can hardly hear it, thats all. ;)
Awesome!
Aware of what? This song rocks! Oh, and when I rated it was 4 rates with a 5.00 score! Nice. Hope it stays that way for a long time. Only thing that would be nice is if there were more vocals. Maybe make another version where it isn't about the techno, but about the lyrics and the whole song itself.
Anyways, I think it's perfect.
What are the lyrics?
The Lyrics are sang by Kate Lesing, shes really talented :)
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Killing Your Ears
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